The skies light up, not bolts,
But a reflection of the thunder.
The air is cool, the breeze picks up,
The sky bellows, the light fades.
You can feel it coming, you can smell the rain.
One thing you can do, you can wish it’d rain.
But don’t let ’em fool you – rain won’t wash away the pain.
But the tears that flow, might make you feel sane.
©2015
charlypriest
Jun 17, 2015 @ 03:10:05
This was a departure from you regular writing, nice departure I should add. Great little poem I should also add.
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~ Sadie ~
Jun 17, 2015 @ 10:22:42
Thanks Charley!! We’ve been getting LOTS of rain lately – came to me while i was sitting out under my back porch watching & listening to it. Glad you liked it! I’ve been needing to write!!
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charlypriest
Jun 28, 2015 @ 07:19:14
Hello, sorry for the late response. Was out of internet for about 10 days or so, well I hope it rains more so it gives you that inspiration
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Paul
Jun 17, 2015 @ 04:41:35
Very cool Sadie.
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~ Sadie ~
Jun 17, 2015 @ 22:13:01
Thanks Paul! Glad you liked it! I enjoy writing poetry. Do you ever write poetry?
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Paul
Jun 18, 2015 @ 23:01:30
No, I;m not very good at it Sadie.
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markbialczak
Jun 18, 2015 @ 20:18:43
Nice, Sadie. I think you needed this one to loosen yourself up!
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~ Sadie ~
Jun 18, 2015 @ 23:44:04
Thanks Mark! Glad you liked it! Enjoyed writing that one & it was the 1st thing I’ve written in awhile 🙂
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