Engulfed – Five Sentence Fiction

As Sophia stood there and watched the cars crash into each other, the metal and fiberglass breaking and bending, becoming one tangled mess, she prayed for the occupants. Then another car stopped and a woman rushed out towards the wreckage, apparently knowing someone in one of the cars. As the woman realized that no one could’ve survived, you could see the shock as it overtook her face, then her body. She screamed a gut-wrenching noise, engulfed in pain, “NO, NO, NO, please God, NO!”  Falling to the ground, crying and sobbing, “My boys, my boys, my boys,” she passed out.

Written in response to Lillie McFerrin’s Five Sentence Fiction prompt Engulf

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She – Art – Feelings

I know, I haven’t written much lately, I apologize for that. I’ll have some new posts soon! In the meantime, thought this was worth sharing . . . could even be a great prompt . . . 🙂

Does it make you feel something?


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